Beautiful
Devil
I
knew it was wrong what I had done to all those
people, but it was the fault of
the person who turned
me into this monster. My name is Emily and I am a
deadly
transformed killing machine. Ever since I had
been turned into a walking
killing machine. I fed on
people and lived on a popular camp ground. My
father
owned the camp ground since before I had
gone missing. Now I was gone to
everybody who used
to know me. I had no feelings; I had grown mentally
and
emotionally cold. I still had a sick sense of right
and wrong but I didn’t
care. I was designed to lure
men and kill and eat for myself, before I would
turn
into the beast I would look like any normal 17 year
old girl. Then when I
had lured my prey far enough
from his family or camp ground I would turn into
my
monster form. In monster form I had a saber cat bare
jaw with no skin, I had
a white complexion and my
eyes would turn neon red. I could smell someone from
ten miles away. I could track someone as far as 50
miles away. I had 2 inch
retractable claws which
made climbing, immensely easy. I wouldn’t wish for
anyone to come across my path but if they didn’t I
would most likely starve and
die. Since the day I was
turned, 50,000 people went missing at the camp
ground.
When the officers came upon the body, it was
torn apart. The person’s torso was
separated from the
rest of his body and his entrails were gone. The
officers
always ruled that the person had died of a
wild animal attack. Now I lived
alone in the forest.
Today would be a particularly good day because it
was
sunny outside which meant that more people
would go camping. So I would climb a
tree and wait
until night to strike. I saw everyone who came into
the camp;
tonight I would definitely not go hungry.
I had my sights on a three course
meal. Three
teenagers, this would be easy. Two boys and one girl.
The girl
would be my appetizer, the first teenage boy
who didn’t look like he had much
meat to offer would
be my dessert and the second teenage boy would be
my main
dish. So I followed them all day. They went
and set up camp on the Crimson
Trail. It was the
same trail on which I had killed the others. What
many people
didn’t know was that the trail had
previously been named Shadow Trail, it had
been
changed to try to keep people off of that side of the
camp ground but it
wouldn’t work. Crimson Trail as
it was now known had the prettiest views the
best
waterfalls and lakes. Naturally everybody loved to
take in the sights.
Today was no exception. The
teenagers set up the camp and then decided to take
a
dip in the lake. As I watched the girl lying on her
towel trying to get a
tan, it reminded me of
something that I used to do before I became a beast. I
watched as the two boys wrestled in the water, it
almost looked like they were
trying to drown each
other. I figured that the bigger teenage boy was the
tanning beauty’s boyfriend because when he came
out of the water he gave her a
bear hug which she
didn’t appear to like. Then the boyfriend’s friend
shook the
water out of his hair onto the girls back.
She wiped it off but you could see a
scowl on her face,
it wasn’t hard to tell that she would soon walk away
from
them both. Then I would get my opportunity to
make my move. Two minutes later
she took her stuff
and said that she was going to back to the tents to
dry off.
When the girl got to the tents I came down
out of my tree so quiet you could
probably hear a pin
drop. I turned into a teenage girl disguise and
approached
the girl. I told her that I was camping at
the same camp ground and that I lost
my dog. She
was stupid enough to buy that story. Apparently her
parents didn’t
teach her not to look for somebody
else’s animal. She walked with me about two
miles
away from her camp and that’s when I turned. I
whipped around knowing
that if she saw my face first
she would scream, so when I whipped around I slit
her throat with my retractable claws. I was so quick
that she didn’t have time
to let out a cry. Then I
grabbed her torso and tore it from the rest of her
body. When her inner organs came out of her body I
ate them. The organs were
full of protein for an
animal my size. After I finished eating her organs I
took a bite out of her throat and ate it to make it
look like another animal
attack. I had seen enough
crime shows on TV to know how to stage the scene.
Next I went to a creek close by and washed my face
and clothes then I went back
to hunting. The two
guys were sitting by the camp fire talking about
doing
stupid stuff. I decided that I would
lure the
smaller guy away next. So I once again transformed
into a teenage girl
and walked up to them. All the
sudden I got an idea, I would transform the dead
girl’s boyfriend into a beast like me and let him hunt
and eat his friend for
practice. So I looked at the
boyfriend of the dead girl and said, “ There is a
girl
about two miles down the trail, she told me to come
find you and tell you
to come help her because she
broke her heel and can’t walk, so she needs you to
carry her back. The boyfriend introduced himself as
Chase. So while the friend
stayed and stoked the fire
the boyfriend of the dead girl followed me into the
woods and when we were about a mile and a half
away I whipped around and
slashed his throat. Then
I cut open his stomach with my claws to reveal his
intestines. I cut a piece of his intestine out and
replaced it with a piece of
my own intestine, then I
licked his gashes and my saliva worked as an
immediate
binding agent and sealed his stomach
next I licked his throat and the gash was
sealed. I
noticed that he was looking a little pale and I
figured that this was
the result of too much blood loss,
so I found a straw in the woods and stabbed
it into
my vein and into his. This was how I, as the beast did
a blood
transfusion. The only reason that I know so
much about the medical field was
because I was
going to become a doctor and so I took those kinds of
classes in
high school. Chase finally came out of his
unconsciousness two minutes later. I
finally had
somebody that would understand me and a lifelong
companion. Now he
looked like the beast that I was
and he was hungry to say the least. So I took
him to
the camp fire where his friend was and he attacked
his friend in beast
form because he didn’t know how
to transform back and forth. So I decided to
assist
him on this hunt at least until I could teach him how
to transform and
kill silently. So as the days went on
I taught him how to transform and three
weeks later
I gave birth to a daughter because the beast side of
me was getting
older and I needed an heir to the
beast throne; when my beast side died of old
age, I
would also die. My daughter’s name was Nebula. I
had built a make shift
nest in a tree out of old tents
and thing that I had found. Until my daughter
turned two years old, I
hunted for her. When she
finally turned two years old her father, my better
beastly half took her on her first hunt. He would start
her out on killing
animals first before he taught her
the art of killing people. The thing that
her father
failed to realize was that the game warden was out
killing animals
to reduce animal attacks. I was
hunting not far from my family so when I heard
an
animal scream and a gunshot, I took off to where my
family was. The warden
had been trying to kill a
bear and when my daughter jumped down to eat it,
he
fired at her. That is when I came flying out of
nowhere and attacked the
warden. He had tried to
take out my offspring and I wasn’t going to allow
that.
So while I fought the warden I heard three gun
shots and before I knew it, I
had transformed back
into my teenage self and lay bleeding to death.
That’s
when Chase flew over and slashed the warden
in the throat and killed him. Chase
tried to lick my
wound but I knew it was too late for that I would
fade away
into unconsciousness and ten seconds
later I was dead. Chase and my daughter
would go
on to eat the warden and eat my body to keep me
from becoming somebody’s
lab experiment. Later
when Nebula would be in her teenage years, she
would go
on to kill her father to keep from
inbreeding. I was dead now and somehow my
heart
was at peace knowing that my life was fulfilled, and
that my family was
safe.
I really like the character you created and your use of vivid detail to paint the whole picture. I could really imagine and visualize in my mind what was going on and it wasn't pretty. I like your story.
ReplyDeleteI like how you came up with your own type of unnatural creature and didn't go for the typical vampire or werewolf. Your solution for not using any dialogue but just working what they said into the story was cool! And I also liked how you explained how she became the way she is instead of just leaving people in the dark about that.
ReplyDeleteThose campers are crazy to keep showing up at a place where 50,000 people had disappeared and even crazier to hike a trail named for the color of blood! :) Your story is an interesting glimpse into the mind of a monster--we can understand her thought process and her origins, as well as her motivation for wanting to create a family of her own.
ReplyDeleteThis story was really good it also reminds me of a song that like that has a similar plot
ReplyDeleteEvil Food Eater Conchita - Meiko (Gluttony) This song focuses on Gluttony(Gula). This song is about a woman who ate only the most delicious food. Now her taste for her food have changed and she wants to eat something new and gross everyday. Nothing enters and leaves her palace. Soon she eats her chefs, her butler and her maid. When she has nothing left to eat she proceeds to eating herself which no one would know what she tastes like.